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Why Trump's speechwriters suck.
So, as I said above, I think Trump's performance actually outperformed the text. I know people like to pick on "Trump on Teleprompter," and that makes sense, because he's not really himself when he's reading, but in this case, I thought he actually took a turd and shined it up a little bit. I want to give an example of what I am talking about.
One of the strongest sections of the speech was on infrastructure. Trump transitioned out of this section with this line:
We will build gleaming new roads, bridges, highways, railways and waterways all across our land. And we will do it with American heart, American hands and American grit.
That's actually not a bad line, but it could have been so much better. First, the writers could have transposed the last two items in the list to say, "American heart, American grit and American hands." That would have been a more powerful list. To make it even stronger, they could have dumped subtlety, and changed the line to this: "American heart, American grit and American labor." And have Trump really stress the phrase "American labor." If they had done that, and he had delivered it in a crescendo, that would be a line that landed with everyone but the most jaded liberals. But they didn't.
Again, what they went with wasn't actually bad, but it was a missed opportunity. Things like that (among many others) are why I was criticizing the speechwriters. I thought it was a really weak text that Trump actually did pretty well with, but his ceiling would have been much higher if the writing had been better.